away from humdrum,
released from the cage of
counted hours,
he was a young man
who bought one-way tickets
to far off places,
a restless soul
conditioned
by an unrooted
upbringing
taken and given to new lands.
-
on a train
the man moved
south between the barley fields
of Bohemia—
drunk on the possibility
of one more
unknown face
found up ahead.
somewhere
out there
rain
began to fall.
-
on the train
with manual levers
he moved through a valley
where iron tracks
bent the earth.
-
the train stopped
at a tiny station
with a pub
built from wood.
the young man entered
a hut shaped pub
sat on a stool
at the bar
and ordered beer,
beneath a cloud of smoke.
-
the man watched men
and women
with raison skin
and swollen limbs,
gulp down
golden jars of beer
before placing coins on the table
for one more.
-
the young man
had one hour
before his next train
would depart,
he chose to drink
what they drank
embrace a silence
that gave way to the sound
of falling rain.
-
two beers later
a train
came screeching
to a halt.
-
the young man stood
from his stool
smiled
at an expressionless
barmaid
with a towel over
a shoulder
and pointed stare that struck
the young man
like a primal scream,
unheard
among the downpour
of valley rain.
Wow, that was beautiful, David. So well expressed, that yearning for something more, for travelling among strangers, being a stranger yourself, almost absent from the place but taking it all in, being immersed in the experience, and seeing things others might miss from being too familiar, too unaware, like seeing that primal scream in the waitress.