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Claire Louise Giblin's avatar

A wonderful poem to share, thank you. And, as Karen V says, your voice and your reading are perfect for this poem, and for the listener. Peace. C.

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Jo Wright's avatar

fair enough! Agreed! To be drunk on the magnificence of it all - we must! - the Linden tree in Riverside, the earnest humans running the NYC half marathon, and earlier - the sparrows chirping, pigeons cooing as I sit sipping tea at my third floor window facing west 77th - the street lights go out, color returns to the gingkoes lining the street below - and I feel drunk with gratitude for yet another day on this journey along the way.

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David's avatar

Love your words Jo! 77th West in NYC - what a time to be alive :)

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Kallol Mazumdar's avatar

All poetry lovers are here hence pitching my page as well. Do subscribe my newsletter guys. I write poetry, stories and erotica. https://kallolpoetry.substack.com/p/i-vanished-as-the-wind

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Kallol Mazumdar's avatar

This is beauty.. Have my full support

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David's avatar

Thank you, Kallol!

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Ravi Kumar N's avatar

This is so amazing.

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David's avatar

Thank you Ravi, it's a great poem by one of the best

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Renee Faber's avatar

Listening to poetry reminds me of the power of the human voice.

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Greg's avatar

I love this poem and your reading of it! - do you know which collection this comes from Tumbleweed Words?

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David's avatar

Thank you Greg, I think it might be a standalone not in flowers of evil. One of my favorites for sure

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Weston Parker's avatar

I would enjoy reading it.

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Sean M. Foster's avatar

This is a lovely reading of a lovely poem

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David's avatar

Thanking you Sean - Baudelaire had some verse in him for sure :) join the movement on Notes sir, let Substack know with a heart and a comment us poets breathe on the page :)

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Sean M. Foster's avatar

Yessir!

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David's avatar

Yes!

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Deborah Brasket's avatar

Love it. Reminds me of Neruda's poem "Poetry ", "And I, infinitesimal being, drunk with the great starry void." No need for wine, the stars will do it for me, the scent of roses, the feel of silk, the sound of wind rippling through leaves. And, yes, poetry, especially when, like Dickinson wrote, I physically feel as if the top of my head were taken off.

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David's avatar

Love Emily's work and the use of the em dash, and Neruda still moves me to this day. A dog has died, quite the poem also, such writers Deborah ✍️ beautifully stated words

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Emma Jarrett's avatar

Thank you for your reading of this.

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David's avatar

Many thanks Emma - I am starting a movement to ask Substack to put in a poetry section on the website - https://substack.com/profile/10309929-david/note/c-15537618

Feel free to support, and thank you as always :)

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Emma Jarrett's avatar

What exactly are you requesting? And how do I support this request? As a poet myself, I have been pondering where to pepper some poetry to peeps ;)

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David's avatar

Click on the link and heart the post - leave a comment and join the movement :)

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Emma Jarrett's avatar

I didn't pose those questions very well. The first was intending to ask what you are requesting of Substack. Not "what exactly are you asking of me?"!!

What's your vision with this movement?

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David's avatar

To have a poetry section added to the platform :)

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Daniel Appleton's avatar

This sounds not unlike a poem by the Sufi mystic Rumi. I have a paperback copy of his work around here somewhere.

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David's avatar

Thank you Daniel - I am starting a movement to ask Substack to put in a poetry section on the website - https://substack.com/profile/10309929-david/note/c-15537618

Feel free to support, and thank you as always :)

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Daniel Appleton's avatar

A pleasure. & I will upgrade to paid when my next payment arrives. & I'll even look up Rumi, Thoreau & Chuang Tzu / Lao - Tzu to add. At least ONE of those books has to have survived 3 moves.

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David's avatar

Wow thank you so much good sir. I read Lao and Tzu - lol - three moves indeed

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Daniel Appleton's avatar

I kept the Tao te Ching from a college class roughly THREE DECADES + ago. Rumi - borrowed from my stepsister. They DO have history, besides the obvious cultural.

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Joanne Mitchinson's avatar

My favourite tipple became virtue 🍸

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David's avatar

my fav tipple also :)

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David's avatar

Thank you kindly and well said Karen, a poem that speaks true :)

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David's avatar

Poetic ears and eyes help inspire the work, Nadia :)

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