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Deborah Brasket's avatar

Powerful poem! I feel you.

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David's avatar

Thank you!

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Little Griefs Poetry's avatar

Provocative stuff. Thanks for sharing.

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David's avatar

Thank you sir

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

Powerful, David!

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David's avatar

Thank you sir

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Khrystyna Catalina's avatar

I felt this pretty deep, nice writing :)

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David's avatar

thank you :) was the goal

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