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Ah, this is beautiful.

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I like the spacing and explanations of this, as it describes how intimacy feels and it does feel good.

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Good job.

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That's a nice poem, David. And, in keeping with the title, it does feel very intimate.

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Totally with you there and how gently and beautifully you put it. I enjoyed the mood in your words. Memorable too. 🙏

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Beautiful, poignant, and true.

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