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Weston Parker's avatar

Really first rate.

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Tuygun's avatar

Such a moving poem, David! I really im enjoyed this one.

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David's avatar

Thank you so much Tuygun, it took time but felt honest, so glad you enjoyed.

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

Touching, engaging, and sad. Such incredibly evocative imagery. Bravo!

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David's avatar

Thank you Andrew, from a writer of your poise, staccato and control over touching and real topics - means the world.

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

My pleasure. The care you’ve put into this is inspiring. Thanks to you too.

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Emma Jarrett's avatar

You took me right there, via all the senses. So much so I feel I now need to throw the windows wide and shower. Putting on some Nina too :)

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David's avatar

Too kind, and yes to Nina always, happy Easter Emma, enjoy these warming days and sultry sounds :)

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Sean's avatar

This is evocative and powerful

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David's avatar

Thank you for the tender words, Sean

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