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Fiction Attic Press's avatar

This: "Everyone wears black so hard you don’t notice after a while that there are differing shades." !

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David's avatar

Thank you!

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E B's avatar

Lovely writing 😃🙋🏻‍♀️

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Love this anyway, but I always appreciate a Clash reference.

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Aug 20, 2021
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Dedication bordering on psychosis. Or maybe vice versa. Coincidentally, today's Roulette Weal is a fictional account of the early punk scene. The venue in the story was inspired by the same venue in which Black Flag played their last show with Rollins.

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Emma Spurling's avatar

This was enticing ✨

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Allison's avatar

First of all, your similes are not too animalistic nor abstract.

Looks that draw blood. Circling like bats. In he'll never know.

This piece was artistry from start to stop.

-Allison

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Allison's avatar

In ways he'll never know.

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Deni's avatar

Cool enjoyed saw everything so clearly 👍🏻💜

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Vivian's avatar

This is beautiful. I really should try writing again too!

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May 15, 2021
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Vivian's avatar

(I write in Dutch though)

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