I love this, but I have to be honest. It was your title that caught my attention. I wrote a poem about an unfinished poem and a few people commented that their poems are never truly finished. Each poem changes through time, by the reader and by the author. By the way that it is read out loud. It sometimes the words of the poem change metaphorically and sometimes they literary change, leading the poem to be rewritten and tweaked by the author. I thought about it the feedback, and I realized that I was talking about half written poems, and not unfinished poems. Again, great poem.
I like the "letter full of unspoken words". That is a really neat line and my wife also liked it. If you want to try single space there is a way to do it.
I love this, but I have to be honest. It was your title that caught my attention. I wrote a poem about an unfinished poem and a few people commented that their poems are never truly finished. Each poem changes through time, by the reader and by the author. By the way that it is read out loud. It sometimes the words of the poem change metaphorically and sometimes they literary change, leading the poem to be rewritten and tweaked by the author. I thought about it the feedback, and I realized that I was talking about half written poems, and not unfinished poems. Again, great poem.
A well rounded poem!
Indecision & unresolved issues,
keep us on our toes,
on " top of our game ",
perhaps a little TOO WELL,
like dancing in a minefield,
blindfolded.
I like the "letter full of unspoken words". That is a really neat line and my wife also liked it. If you want to try single space there is a way to do it.
Enjoyed the reality of it all.
We must use what we still have until our point and counterpoint has exhausted us!
Press ever on.
Who to?