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red eye
on a plane, on a plane rising
the hostess refuses to smile;
they won't sell me drink for the whole flight back to Europe
dear neutered body
say hello to a hail mary state of mind.
a sedate window view
of an out of reach dreamer,
pour into me.
it is now the hour to say goodbye.
we were always falling like stars
between clouds that formed a final breath.
the other knew the other
too well.
how you can be volatile and not know.
I shape a heart from a headphone lead
toast a cup of warm water
to no one
to anyone who feels this particular.
the final act
of a born run away
moving through the world at good speed.
starving
starving can only be done alone.
lovers are quenched by love
twins come in pairs
poets grip, bottles of wine.
suits like coffins, tailor-made
rain drops, never raindrop
a slave does not belong.
she is gone
sweet innocent pop
song after midnight
play once
over and over.
stray dogs never form a pack.
because it can only be done alone.
TO ME...I might be wrong, as to STARVING, which i find spontaneus and in the same time written in the suitable words, it s so clear that real satisfaction comes from the sense of sharing the moments you re living, otherwise one can only starve alone with no possibility to play the role of a slave neither, as "it" is supposed tohave an owner???and not even stray dogs can form a unique, as they are loose dogs..starving, any kind of metaphor it may have, it is only possible when alone...SHE IS GONE, love pains and awareness of the new dimensions, image after image, symbolically lead to your feelings..this is my free comment..David, will you permit me to work cooperate with you to spread these poems in Itaian?..let's try..
red eye- it 's apparently simple or apparently difficult..it's not direct and immediate-one is supposed to stop on the sense of the flowing of words without punctuaction-reference to Alicia K. is caught, and to Bruce S. in born run away..probably!, however a state of disoriented and painful mind is present,and you try to have a sweet smile from the hostess to weaken your internal malaise ..only from the out something can help you...Strong image of a Neutered body in opposition to a hail mary state of mind. If heat hurts it becomes a shape from the headphone , who can perceive this particular? no one, or anyone who feels like you., the endgame of a young man born to move around the world with a contemporary romantic soul, announcing a new way to talk about the dilemma in love, through the flux of ordinary common words from the inside.
hold on david, if it is your real name....love ALE