Thanks for sharing your work! I've recommended your publication to substack. I am really grateful to have stumbled into your blog, friend. Hope you are well.
I prefer 'Starving' there - excellent.
red eye- it 's apparently simple or apparently difficult..it's not direct and immediate-one is supposed to stop on the sense of the flowing of words without punctuaction-reference to Alicia K. is caught, and to Bruce S. in born run away..probably!, however a state of disoriented and painful mind is present,and you try to have a sweet smile from the hostess to weaken your internal malaise ..only from the out something can help you...Strong image of a Neutered body in opposition to a hail mary state of mind. If heat hurts it becomes a shape from the headphone , who can perceive this particular? no one, or anyone who feels like you., the endgame of a young man born to move around the world with a contemporary romantic soul, announcing a new way to talk about the dilemma in love, through the flux of ordinary common words from the inside.
hold on david, if it is your real name....love ALE
TO ME...I might be wrong, as to STARVING, which i find spontaneus and in the same time written in the suitable words, it s so clear that real satisfaction comes from the sense of sharing the moments you re living, otherwise one can only starve alone with no possibility to play the role of a slave neither, as "it" is supposed tohave an owner???and not even stray dogs can form a unique, as they are loose dogs..starving, any kind of metaphor it may have, it is only possible when alone...SHE IS GONE, love pains and awareness of the new dimensions, image after image, symbolically lead to your feelings..this is my free comment..David, will you permit me to work cooperate with you to spread these poems in Itaian?..let's try..