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Life in our 3rd-dimension! THAT is poetry!😌

🙏NAMASTE💜

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Carol Angel's avatar

Loved all the feelings that were invoked along this murky life force for his gloomy workday.

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Arjan Tupan's avatar

A dark scene and a great write.

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Mark Harbinger's avatar

What a fine effort. Thanks.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I've lived this for sure

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Cameron S. Bradley's avatar

Great poem.

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Ann Rower's avatar

great finish . which makes it a poem!

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David's avatar

Thank you Ann :)

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Deni's avatar

Absolutely loved this one, so to the point & so bloody true😈👍🏻❤️🖤

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David's avatar

Thank you Deni :)

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May 15, 2023
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David's avatar

You're a ⭐

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May 13, 2023
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Daniel Appleton's avatar

Billy Joel could learn a few dozen things from him. I was reminded a LITTLE of " Piano Man ". Billy has written A LOT from personal experience.

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