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Life in our 3rd-dimension! THAT is poetry!😌

🙏NAMASTE💜

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Loved all the feelings that were invoked along this murky life force for his gloomy workday.

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A dark scene and a great write.

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Reads as absolutely authentic. Beautiful work.

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You're a ⭐

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You are. <3

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What a fine effort. Thanks.

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I've lived this for sure

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Great poem.

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great finish . which makes it a poem!

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Thank you Ann :)

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Absolutely loved this one, so to the point & so bloody true😈👍🏻❤️🖤

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Thank you Deni :)

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May 13, 2023
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Billy Joel could learn a few dozen things from him. I was reminded a LITTLE of " Piano Man ". Billy has written A LOT from personal experience.

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