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Beautifully written! Warms my hear! Hope the love story ends well!

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Hmmm it’s haiku you..,,

Quest? ❤️ 💕 interview with Dave Brynne: WL / where were you when you heard Stevie Wonder’s Superstition?

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Also everyone wanted to play like Santana- Quest 💕 Love- I started out the Day with WUMB : Glen Campbell as Artist of the Day / and Yes !! I loved the Glen Cambell show/ John Hartford of course and yes ! I had a Glen Campbell poster in my closet !! Horseback riding - No David Cassidy

For me!!

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Heartbreaking and gorgeous. It read like getting lost in a large painting, the details drawing your eye to the heart.

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Renee, your words move me, thank you so much.

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Beautiful and touching! Another great piece, David.

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Thank you Tuygun, lovely words from you

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Great poem David. The last stanza is powerful and moving

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Thank you so much for the kind words and support Jason 🙏

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Sensual

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Thank you Sean :)

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lots of green, red & white here. lovely

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Thank you JB :)

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It's the occasional wind that tumbles the potent words, and you my friend have done it! We must be ready when it tumbles us rolling with the one we love. All the best!

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Appreciate your comment, thank you Tom - let the wind blow over us softly :)

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Absolutely gorgeous. I love the imagery!

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Thank you so much Coco, loving your words :)

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I'm with Coco about the imagery. I can conjure such, but I have to be completely " Lao - Dzu " about it. I would say " Zen " but that's being WAY overused.

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Thank you Daniel, zen is good for me today, nice word for the poem also :)

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You're quite welcome, my soul is still being downloaded into my body. I am Lt. Data. 🤖

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lol - love it, download well good sir

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I can be a mega - nerd. Geek - Man ! Sheldon Cooper away ! BAZINGA.

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